Question

短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（＾)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔\〕劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.

As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a young guy who belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty than the former generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford. Now plenty of girls would prefer to marry man with a house and a car on his own. I don’t think love built on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.

Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future?

Answer 1

改錯(cuò)答案

Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.

As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a

                                 (bear 改成born)

young guy who belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty

belongs （全文現(xiàn)在時(shí)）                 difficult（此處為形容詞比較級形式）

than the former generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford.

but 改成 and（并列關(guān)系）

Now plenty of girls would prefer to marry /\ man with a house and a car  on  his own. I don’t

a（man可數(shù)名詞）           of（of one's own屬于某人）

think love built on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.

                          is（cars復(fù)數(shù)） However（轉(zhuǎn)折）

Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good

                                                            efforts（可數(shù)名詞）

life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future

                       up 去掉（make life better 讓生活更美好）