Question

20．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10 處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（夷），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2援只充許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起） 不計分．
    Today is Tom's 70th birthday，but there is anybody with him．He feels very disappointing．His sons didn't care for him on this special day．Although the cakes are very delicious，but he doesn't want to touch it．He just wants his children come and see him．Nowadays，many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents．But blood is thick than water．Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty．Thus，we should and must bring happy to them when they become old．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字通過講述Tom七十歲的生日，孩子們沒把這個特殊的日子記心上，留下Tom一人孤獨地面對蛋糕的事情，告訴我們血濃于水，記著父母養(yǎng)育我們的艱辛，父母老了，要多回家看看，帶給他們幸福和快樂．

解答 Today is Tom's 70th birthday，but there is anybody with him．He feels very disappointing．His sons didn't care for him
                                                                 nobody                                       disappointed                 dodn't
on this special day．Although the cakes are very delicious，but he doesn't want to touch it．He just wants his children∧come
                                                                                       去掉but                              them                                     to
and see him．Nowadays，many young people are so busy and independent whichthey seldom visit their parents．But blood 
                                                                                                               that
is thick than water．Our dear parents brought us up fora lot of difficulty．Thus，we should and must bring happy to them when
   thicker                                                               with                                                                           happiness
they become old．

1．a(chǎn)nybody改為nobody；考查不定代詞，根據(jù)句意應當是"湯姆的70歲生日沒人跟他在一起"故用nobody．
2．disappointing改為disappointed；考查分詞做形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，描述事物的性質，過去分詞做形容詞修飾人，形容
     人的心理狀態(tài)．
3．didn't改為don't；考查時態(tài)，結合上文時態(tài)，這里應該用一般現(xiàn)在時．
4．去掉but；考查連詞，although不能與but連用，所以去掉but．
5，it改為them；考查代詞，這里them指代前面的cakes．
6．come前面加to；考查不定式，want sb to do．
7．which改為that；考查結果狀語從句，這里so…that…是固定結構，意為"如此…以至于"．
8．thick改為thicker；考查比較級，句子中有比較級的標志性單詞than．
9．for改為with；考查介詞，這里意思是"父母經(jīng)歷了很多困難吧我們養(yǎng)大"．with a lot of difficulty是介詞短語做狀語．
10．happy改為happiness；考查名詞，根據(jù)句意"當父母老了我們應該帶給他們幸福"可知這里應該用名詞形式．

點評 短文改錯首先要通讀全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式結構，弄清句子間的結構關系，然后運用所掌握的語法，詞匯等基本知識找
出錯誤加以改正．