Question

“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the Gaokao, from 150 points to 100 points by 2016.”

請(qǐng)依據(jù)上面這則新聞，結(jié)合實(shí)際，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述你的理由。

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

④詞數(shù)為120左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

There is some news that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination, but I don’t think it has any effect on our English learning. English is still playing an important part in our daily life.

With the development of China’s economy, more and more people are rich enough to travel or study abroad. English is the first problem they are faced with. Besides, as devices and household appliances of foreign brands are flooding our daily life, English takes a more important part. What’s more, armed with a good command of English, we will be better prepared for the challenges of globalization.

However, reducing the English section is good for us students. It helps to lessen our academic burden. But this change does not mean English study can be ignored. Being tested for less score doesn’t mean the subject can be taken lightly. In my opinion, the national enthusiasm for English will keep on.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文，開放性作文。所給材料雖然新穎，但是所談的話題考生卻非常熟悉，寫起來有話可說。寫好本篇作文的難點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)：一是怎么用簡(jiǎn)短的話吧“這則新聞”的內(nèi)容說清楚；二是就“這則新聞”的內(nèi)容就“自己認(rèn)識(shí)方面”談?wù)劺碛伞Ｖ劣凇罢務(wù)勀銓?duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)”則相對(duì)要容易得多。另外文章用典型的三段式，要注意段與段之間的順利過渡。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文采用典型的三段式：揭示話題、談對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)和陳述理由。范文第一段用兩句話就揭示了話題，并恰到好處地過渡到下一段。第一句話句子非常長(zhǎng)，多達(dá)30字，充分顯示了作者駕馭句子的高超能力。這是一個(gè)并列復(fù)合句：“but”連接的并列句和兩個(gè)名詞性從句(同位語從句：that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination和賓語從句：it has any effect on our English learning.)。第二句話是個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句與第二段內(nèi)容進(jìn)行無縫對(duì)接。第二段過渡詞句(Besides,what’s more等)的運(yùn)用和各種各樣短語(With the development of, more and more, are faced with, takes a more important part ,with a good command of ,be better prepared for等)的運(yùn)用為文章增色不少。第三段用三句話簡(jiǎn)潔明了談了自己的理由。并用一句話“In my opinion, the national enthusiasm for English will keep on.”來總結(jié)升華本篇文章的主題，為這篇文章做出了圓滿的收尾。