Question

2．Directions；write on rnglish composition according to the instruchons given below in chtnese
假設(shè)你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽，請按如下要求完成一篇短文：
（1）簡要描述下圖內(nèi)容，并點(diǎn)名主題；
（2）聯(lián)系實(shí)際，表達(dá)該圖帶給你的啟示
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于120個；
（2）不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文，根據(jù)文章圖片和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，聯(lián)系實(shí)際，闡述圖帶來的啟示．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．描述圖片內(nèi)容；2．聯(lián)系實(shí)際帶來的啟示．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：sth accumulate（積累），form sth（形成），convey…to…（把…傳達(dá)給），be made up of（由…組成），It is one's responsibility to do （做某事是我們的責(zé)任），make efforts （努力），as a matter of fact（事實(shí)上），A have something in common with B （A和B有共同之處），as well（也），learn form…（向…學(xué)習(xí)），live a harmonious life（過和諧的生活），drops of water（水滴）．
【高分句型一】
1．As can be seen from the picture，when drops of water accumulate，they can form the sea，trees added together can make the forest，and the human society is formed by every individual of family．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"as"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"they can form the sea，trees added together can make the forest，and the human society is formed by every individual of family"．
【高分句型二】
2．The picture conveys an important message to us that human society is made up of every individual．
此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句解釋說明名詞"message"的具體內(nèi)容．
【高分句型三】
3．Learning form each others，we can live a harmonious life．That is what all the people expect，I am sure．
此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語"Learning form each others"作狀語，主句為"we can live a harmonious life．That is what all the people expect，I am sure"．

解答 As can be seen from the picture，when drops of water accumulate，they can form the sea，trees added together can make the forest，and the human society is formed by every individual of family．【高分句型一】（描述圖片內(nèi)容）
The picture conveys an important message to us that human society is made up of every individual．【高分句型二】it is our responsibility to make us many efforts as possible to make our society a good place to live in．As a matter of fact，every individual has uniqueness and every individual has something in common with others as well．Learning form each others，we can live a harmonious life．That is what all the people expect，I am sure．【高分句型三】（聯(lián)系實(shí)際的啟示）

點(diǎn)評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．