Question

假設(shè)你是李華，最近，你的外數(shù)Martin Mellish給你發(fā)Email詢問(wèn)你校課外活動(dòng)（after-class activities）的開(kāi)展情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封回信。

1、學(xué)校開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)的情況：20多個(gè)社團(tuán)、30多門選修課；

2、你參加的課外活動(dòng)以及你體會(huì)到的益處（兩點(diǎn)益處）；

3、為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議（兩條建議）。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100-120詞左右；

2. 回信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

3. 參考詞匯：選修課 elective,社團(tuán)club

Dear Martin,                         

I am glad to hear from you. In your email, _______________________________________

                                                       Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Martin,

     I am glad to hear from you. In your email you asked me about the after-school activities in our school and here I would like to introduce to you something about it.

     There are over 20 students’clubs and more than 30 electives in our school. I am in the basketball and chess clubs.The activities not only build up my body and mind but also provide a perfect platform and rich choices for my future development. Besides, they also free me from the heavy work of study,guaranteeing my sustainable development.

Here is my suggestion to the students on how to choose after-class activities: You’d better choose those which interest and suit you. What’s more, you have to balance your study and activities so as to achieve both.

You are warmly welcome to come and experience our after-school activities.

Best wishes!

Sincerely yours，

                       L i Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類作文。假設(shè)你是李華，最近，你的外數(shù)Martin Mellish給你發(fā)Email詢問(wèn)你校課外活動(dòng)（after-class activities）的開(kāi)展情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封回信。要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要寫(xiě)出自己的看法。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的詞數(shù)100-120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類作文

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】hear from這個(gè)短語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確應(yīng)用；I would like to do sth.這個(gè)句型的使用；not only ，but also這個(gè)句型的使用；Here is my suggestion to the students on how to choose after-class activities這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；You’d better choose those which interest and suit you.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類書(shū)面表達(dá)