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4．2014年9月3日，國務(wù)院頒布了《關(guān)于深化考試招生制度改革的實施意見》，其中關(guān)于啟動高考綜合改革試點(diǎn)工作時提到部分科目將實行一年多考，對此人們反應(yīng)不一．請根據(jù)下表的提示，寫一篇英語短文．

支持	1．學(xué)生可自主選擇參考時間，有利于提高高考成績．       2．部分科目提前考完，可以減輕考生的學(xué)習(xí)壓力．
反對	1．多次考試，會增加考生的負(fù)擔(dān)．       2．增加考試成本，浪費(fèi)教育資源．
你的看法	…

詞數(shù)：120左右
注意：短文的開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)．
According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made．some of the subjects will be examined many times in a year．People have different opinions about this．
Some say that this program gives students more free time．Students can choose the exam time themselves and it's obviously an effective way to improve their grades of the university entrance examination．In addition，if some of the subjects are finished ahead of time，students will be in less pressure during the time．
However，there are also many people against the program．They hold the view that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．Also，it is a waste of education resources because the exams will cost more in this case．
In my opinion，to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relax ourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination．So I'm looking forward to seeing the reform program brought into force．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，介紹人們對國務(wù)院頒布的《關(guān)于深化考試招生制度改革的實施意見》中部分學(xué)科實行一年多考的不同反應(yīng)．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．支持的觀點(diǎn)及原因； 2．反對的觀點(diǎn)及原因；3．你的看法．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：according to （根據(jù)），in addition （除…之外還），ahead of time （提前），be in pressure （處在壓力之中），beagainst （反對），increase the burdens of （增加…的負(fù)擔(dān)），awaste of  （浪費(fèi)…），in this case （在這種情況下），in one'sopinion （某人認(rèn)為），a good way to sth（做某事的好方法），look forward to doing （期望做某事），bring sthinto force．（實施）．
【高分句型】

1．According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made，
這里是that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞是the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform，that在定語從句中作made的賓語．
2．They hold the view that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．
這里是that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，解釋說明前面的名詞the view．
3．to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relax ourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination．
這里是動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞為is，表語為a good way to relax ourselves．while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination作時間狀語．

解答 According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made，【高分句型】someof the subjects will be examined many times in a year．People have differentopinions about this．（開頭---引出話題）
Some say that this program gives students more free time．Students can choose the exam time themselves and it's obviously an effective way to improve theirgrades of the university entrance examination．In addition，if some of thesubjects are finished ahead of time，students will be in less pressure duringthe time．（支持）
    However，there are also many people against the program．They hold theview that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．【高分句型】Also，it is a waste of education resources becausethe exams will cost more in this case．（反對）
Inmy opinion，to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relaxourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entranceexamination．【高分句型】So I'm looking forward to seeing there form program brought into force．（自己的觀點(diǎn)）

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