Question

7．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中
共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或
修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
 Dear Tom，
     How is everything going recently？That has been a long time since we meet in China last time．Having passed the finally exams，I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this winter holiday．Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities？I prefer to big and modern cities．I guess I'd better book a hotel．What is the price for single boy like myself？Is it easy to find Chinese food？What is the traffic like，after I travel between cities in the US？Hope to hearing from you．Thank you!
Best regards!
                                                                     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要介紹李華在寒假想去美國旅行，向湯姆詢問有關(guān)美國的城市和交通的情況．

解答 Dear Tom，
     How is everything going recently？That has been a long time since we meet in China
                                                           It                                              met
last time．Having passed thefinallyexams，I am busy planning a two-weekstrip to the US
                                          final                                               two-week
during this winter holiday．Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities？
                                                                                                               American
I prefe rto big and modern cities．I guess I'd better pre-order a hotel．What is the price for∧single boy 
                                                                                                                                      a
like myself？Is it easy to find Chinese food？What is the traffic like，after I 
         me                                                                                        when/if
travel between cities in the US？Hope to hearing from you．Thank you!
                                                            hear

   1．That改成 It 考查代詞．  句意為：自從上次在中國見面已經(jīng)很長時間了．這里使用了句型：It has been+一段時間+since…，因此That改成 It
   2．meet改成 met 考查時態(tài)．since后面和一般過去式連用，所以meet改成 met
   3．finally--final，考查形容詞，通過最后一次考試后．用形容詞final修飾exams
   4．two-weeks--two-week，考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)． 句意為：我在忙于計劃去美國的兩星期的旅行．two-week是復(fù)合形容詞，"兩星期的"，week不能用復(fù)數(shù)
   5．America--American，考查形容詞． 句意為：你有去美國城市旅行的建議嗎？America"美國"，改成形容詞：American"美國的"
   6．去掉prefer后的to，考查介詞搭配．我更喜歡大的現(xiàn)代化的城市．Prefer是及物動詞：去掉to
   7．for后面加a，考查冠詞．句意為：象我這么大的男孩的價格是多少？boy是可數(shù)名詞，前面加不定冠詞：for后面加a
   8．myself--me  考查人稱代詞，這里用反身代詞myself意思不通，改成me
   9．a(chǎn)fter 改成when/if 考查連詞．當(dāng)/如果我在美國的兩個城市之間旅游，交通怎樣？after 改成when/if
   10．hearing改成 hear 考查不定式． 句意為：希望收到你的來信．Hope to do sth，所以hearing改成 hear．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．