Question

2．你校校長(zhǎng)打算改進(jìn)食堂的設(shè)施（facilities）和服務(wù)（service），請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫信，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh．字?jǐn)?shù)在120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書信．
寫信目的為：建議改進(jìn)食堂的設(shè)施（facilities）和服務(wù)（service）
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，描述話題內(nèi)容；2，分析原因；3，提供建議及呼吁．

解答 March8th，2010
Dear Mr．President，
My classmates and I are very glad to know that you are determined to improve our canteen facilities and service，I would like to give my opinions．
Firstly，the quality of the dishes should be improved，Undoubtedly，there are a lot of delicious dishes，but all the year round，they are the same．More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day．
Apart from the quality，the price is supposed to be adjusted，too．Some food which is delicious has been priced dramatically high that most of us can't afford．
What's more，the environment is so noisy that we can't enjoy our meals in good mood．I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax．From bad to worse，the lights are so dull．
I will appreciate from the bottom of our hearts if you will take actions immediately．
Yours，
David

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