Question

假定你是李明，你的澳大利亞朋友Steven給你來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給他回信提出建議。
要點(diǎn)：
參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；看中文書(shū)刊電視；學(xué)唱中文歌曲；交中國(guó)朋友。
注意：
文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
詞數(shù)：120左右。
Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are my suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。還要考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)，單詞拼寫(xiě)，主謂一致等問(wèn)題，也可以使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些句型： it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. 這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，還有文章使用了First, Then, Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
考點(diǎn): 考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)