Question

假設(shè)你是李華，正在美國參加學(xué)習(xí)，課堂上老師要求你簡要介紹我國的名人，你選擇了姚明和劉翔，兩位體育明星，他們的基本情況如下：

姓名	姚明	劉翔
出生	1980年，上海	1983年，上海
事跡	世界著名籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，現(xiàn)在美國NBA火箭隊(duì)效力，球隊(duì)主力隊(duì)員之一，多次進(jìn)入美國全明星隊(duì)。	多次獲得世界110米欄冠軍，2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍，不久以后還打破了世界記錄。
愛好	聽流行音樂	音樂，唱歌

寫作要求：

1．  簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容（開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好）；

2．  使用5個(gè)句子。

3．  參考詞匯：火箭隊(duì) Rocket，  110米欄110-metre hurdling，雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)——the Athens Olympic Games  

Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.

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                                                   That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music whilst Liu Xiang likes singing.

解析:

文體	記敘文，用第三人稱
信息組織	有兩條線索：一是分別對比兩人的各項(xiàng)情況，二是先介紹姚明，再介紹劉翔。第二條線索比較好。 ①姚明，籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，出生；②主力隊(duì)員，明星隊(duì)； ③劉翔，110米欄世界冠軍；④04雅典冠軍，打破記錄；⑤兩人的愛好。
時(shí)態(tài)	一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)