Question

4．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom 幾天前給你發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你的寒假生活情況，請根據(jù)以下要點給他回一封郵件：
1．感謝Tom 的來信；
2．假期生活總體情況介紹；
3．假期中最大的收獲和遺憾．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于開放類的書信作文．文中要點只提到了大體的提綱，并沒有具體的內(nèi)容，考生可靈活發(fā)揮想象來完成作文，只要符合其中的三個要點即可：感謝來信；假期生活總體情況及收獲和遺憾．審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱．
重要短語：
did sb good both mentally and physically對某人身心健康都有益；be busy doing sth忙于做某事；give sth a thorough cleaning徹底打掃…；pay a visit to參觀某地；benefit sb from sth使某人從…中受益．
高分句型：
1．Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．本句為as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句用的倒裝用法，其中本句中倒裝的是表語short．
2．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
3．What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．本句中的主語為what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，后面的that引導(dǎo)的是一個表語從句．

解答 Dear Tom，
  I'm writing to tell you something about how I enjoyed my winter vacation．（寫信目的）
   Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．（高分句型）On the first few days，I was busy giving our flat a thorough cleaning to welcome the Spring Festival．I also paid a visit to the nearby nursing home with my classmates．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．（高分句型）I also went on a trip along with my parents to Hainan．We had great fun appreciating the sunset there．（假期活動）
   What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．（高分句型）What regrets most was that I did not work hard at my lessons before．Now I'm going all out for the coming entrance exam．（個人感受）
  What about your winter vacation？I'm looking forward to your early reply．
  Yours
  Li Hua

點評 考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數(shù)．考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢．動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．