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假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last week I paid a visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Smith. He and I are used to live next to each other. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for the main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Smith now lived in the suburb near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it takes quit a long time get to the downtown. Therefore, Mr. Smith doesn’t seem to worry about a long distance. A new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure that life will be better in the future.

【答案】

【1】刪除are

【2】which改為that

【3】were改為was

【4】they改為we

【5】lived改為lives

【6】big改為bigger

【7】time后加to

【8】Therefore改為However

【9】a改為the

【10】year改為years

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，介紹了我去看望以前的老鄰居史密斯先生；并回憶了過(guò)去的住所以及現(xiàn)在對(duì)方的所住之地的信息。

【1】刪除are 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)used to do sth過(guò)去常常做某事；be used to do sth被用來(lái)做某事；他和我過(guò)去常常住在一起。

【2】which改為that 考查同位語(yǔ)從句。本句中that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句，that在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分。which引導(dǎo)名詞性從句時(shí)，要在句中作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)等成分。

【3】were改為was 考查主謂一致。當(dāng)句子主語(yǔ)為“A along with B”時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和A保持一致。本句中主語(yǔ)是the old building，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用單數(shù)was。

【4】they改為we 考查代詞。本句在we指代Mr. Smith和我兩個(gè)人，所以使用we，而不是they。

【5】lived改為lives 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是now，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)名詞Mr. smith，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用lives。

【6】big改為bigger 考查比較級(jí)。本句中介詞than和比較級(jí)連用，句意：他現(xiàn)在的公寓要比以前的更大。

【7】time后加to 考查固定句式。句式：It takes sb some time to do sth做某事花掉某人...時(shí)間。本句的it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是不定式短語(yǔ)。

【8】Therefore改為However 考查上下文串聯(lián)。句意：唯一的問(wèn)題是到市中心要花很多時(shí)間，但是史密斯先生不擔(dān)心距離太遠(yuǎn)。上下文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用副詞however表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

【9】a改為the 考查冠詞。本句中使用定冠詞the表示特指，the long distance就是指前句中史密斯先生的公寓到市中心的距離。

【10】year改為years 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。本句中可數(shù)名詞year前面有a few修飾，所以使用復(fù)數(shù)名詞years。

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