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—個英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿請你寫一篇英語稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個節(jié)日里的主要活動。
1. 寫作要點：它是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；
2. 家人團聚；
3. 賞月、吃月餅；
4. 還有旅游、訪友等其他活動。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：中秋節(jié) the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷 lunar calendar
賞月 enjoy the full moon         月餅 moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.________________________________                        _
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home to attend the celebration. The moon that might looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to the traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。寫作時首先要仔細審題，確定人稱，時態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們在寫作中應(yīng)當用盡可能少的形式表達盡可能多的語義內(nèi)容，力求簡潔精練。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫出所列要點，要全面。我們在用詞上應(yīng)該仔細揣摩，準確清晰地表達我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語，使文章言簡意賅。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如：no matter how far away or how busy we are, As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. 等。還運用了主語從句What we love most，和定語從句the time we enjoy the full moon together. 等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Usually,With the beautiful moon up in the sky,  In addition to等。