Question

17．短文改錯(cuò)
Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium，there I met some young America tourists．
I greeted to each other and began to chat．From chat I learned that they were college students study at Beijing Language University．They all seem to love Chinese culture．As walking，they were busy taking picture of the Stadium．
Apparently，we were impressed by the grand gym．But then I felt very proud that China was becoming more and more  attractive for foreigners．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者通過(guò)描述自己上周日在鳥(niǎo)巢遇見(jiàn)美國(guó)游客（也是北京語(yǔ)言大學(xué)的留學(xué)生）的經(jīng)過(guò)，主要表達(dá)了自己對(duì)中國(guó)能夠越來(lái)越受到外國(guó)人的青睞而感到自豪的心情．

解答 Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium，there I met some
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young America tourists．I greetedto each other and began to chat．
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From∧chat I learned that they were college students study at Beijing
      the                                                                     studying 
Language University．They all seem to love Chinese culture．
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As walking，they were busy taking picture of the Stadium．
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Apparently，wewere impressed by the grand gym．But then 
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I felt very proud that China was becoming more and more 
 attractive for foreigners．
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1．將there改為where    考查關(guān)系副詞的用法   根據(jù)句意"上個(gè)星期日，我去了鳥(niǎo)巢體育館，在那里我遇到了一些年輕的美國(guó)游客"以及此處之前的逗號(hào)可知，本句是非限定性的定語(yǔ)從句；由于先行詞the Bird's Nest Stadium在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)；故用關(guān)系副詞where
2．將America改為American   考查形容詞的用法  此處用來(lái)修飾名詞tourists，故用形容詞American
3．去掉to    考查動(dòng)詞的用法   由于greet是及物動(dòng)詞，故應(yīng)去掉to
4．在chat前加the   考查定冠詞的用法   根據(jù)上文可知，此處的chat表示特指：在鳥(niǎo)巢，我與美國(guó)游客的聊天；故用the
5．將study改為studying  考查現(xiàn)在分詞的用法   分析句意可知，此處在句中作后置定語(yǔ)修飾名詞students，并且與該名詞構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，意為：在北京語(yǔ)言大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的大學(xué)生；故用studying  
6．將seem改為seemed   考查時(shí)態(tài)   根據(jù)上文講述的是上周日的事情可知，此處應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；故用seemed
7．將picture改為pictures   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)"take picture"意為：拍照；此處指的是他們?cè)诿τ诮o體育館拍照，因此這里指的不只是一張照片；故用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)pictures 
8．將we改為they  考查人稱(chēng)代詞    根據(jù)上文可知，此處描述的應(yīng)是：宏偉的體育館給那些年輕的美國(guó)游客們留下了深刻的印象；故用they
9．將But改為And    由于前一句表達(dá)的是美國(guó)游客對(duì)宏大的體育館印象深刻；后一句表達(dá)了我因此而感到自豪，因此前后兩句應(yīng)表示并列關(guān)系；故用And
10．將for改為to    考查固定短語(yǔ)的用法      固定短語(yǔ)be attractive to sb．對(duì)某人有吸引力；故用to

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類(lèi)誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類(lèi)試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類(lèi)的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類(lèi)試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類(lèi)句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．