Question

7．下面短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改某個單詞
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 
Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．We were both amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．I should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．

Answer 1

分析 上個星期六，我和同學(xué)們?nèi)�參觀博物館．我們對恐龍感興趣，就先去了恐龍世界．在那看到了很多化石，當(dāng)向?qū)Ыo我們展示九百五十萬年前的恐龍蛋時，我們都驚呆了．我們還去參觀了古老的中國發(fā)明，我們都為身為中國人感到自豪．我一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，為建設(shè)我們偉大的祖國而作出自己的貢獻(xiàn)．

解答 Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in
                                                                                                            interested
dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．
                 so
There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．
              saw                                     kinds
We were both amazed when the guide showed us
             all
some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
                                       去掉
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．
                                                                                                         on
When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．
                                                                                                                         meaningful
I should study harder to be∧inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．
                                      加an                                                                     building
1．interesting改為interested．句意表達(dá)的我們的感受，要用過去分詞．現(xiàn)在分詞表示事物的特征．
2．but改為so．句意表達(dá)的是承接，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
3．see改為saw．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
4．kind改為kinds．句意表達(dá)的是不同類型，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
5．both改為all．句意表達(dá)的是我們所有人，要用all．both指兩個人．
6．they去掉．題干在which引導(dǎo)的是定語從句，which在從句中充當(dāng)主語，they多余．
7．in改為on．短語搭配，on show演出，展示．
8．meaningfully改為meaningful．題干中meaningful是作賓語補(bǔ)足語，要用形容詞形式．
9．加an．題干中inventor可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指，又是以元音開頭的，要用an來修飾．
10．build改為building．短語搭配，make contributions to為…做貢獻(xiàn)，to是介詞，后面要接名詞或動名詞．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．