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【題目】假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tony給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，詢問(wèn)高考延期后你的近況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括:

1.感謝關(guān)心;

2.你目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

Many thanks for your concern! Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.

Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit. I sometimes suffer test anxiety , which does upset me a lot. But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger. I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給美國(guó)朋友Tony回信，告訴他高考延期后自己的近況。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1. 感謝關(guān)心;

2.你目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

thanks for；due to；under pressure

第三步: 連詞成句

Many thanks for your concern!

Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.

Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit.

But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger.

I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing,On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤(rùn)色修改