Question

在周一下午，你們班和六班舉行了一次激烈的籃球友誼賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，來(lái)介紹比賽的過(guò)程和你的感受。

1.比賽過(guò)程：上下半場(chǎng)共40分鐘，盡管有人感冒了，但全體隊(duì)員竭盡全力，同學(xué)加油助威，你們班以60：56勝出。

2.班主任評(píng)價(jià)：祝賀獲勝，指出團(tuán)結(jié)和勇氣是你們制勝法寶。

3.自身感受：深受鼓舞，團(tuán)結(jié)一心建設(shè)最優(yōu)秀的班集體。

注意：1.用第一人稱介紹

2.詞數(shù)：150詞左右

Answer 1

On Monday afternoon , our class together with Class 6 held a competitive basketball match .

The match lasted 40 minutes with two halves.And the last score was 60:56.That is to say , our team had a narrow defeat, which excited us very much . Our team made great dfforts in it despite unimaginable difficulty .Our team never defeated the team of Class 6 before .Besides , one of our members got a serious cold. Our classmates got together to cheer up our team all the time .The moment our team met with difficulty , we stood out .So we competed as a whole , which was the key to our victory. 

This match was over in a friendly and exciting atmosphere .Our headteacher congratulated us on our winning , adding that “union ” and “courage” contributed to our success.

In a nutshell , this basketball match inspires us a lot and we will continue to devote ourselves to constructing our best class.

解析:

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)非常貼近學(xué)生在校生活實(shí)際，話題內(nèi)容涉及校內(nèi)活動(dòng)，學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。同時(shí)能夠讓學(xué)生充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，表達(dá)自己的思想。

1.注意幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵信息和特點(diǎn)：

A. 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)運(yùn)用常見(jiàn)的直接要點(diǎn)提示類型，要點(diǎn)明確清楚，便于學(xué)生組織文章，理清脈絡(luò)。

B．三個(gè)方面的要點(diǎn)有一定的開(kāi)放性，但表達(dá)時(shí)要注意方向性和限制性，不能過(guò)多。