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4．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（﹨）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Several days before July 28，1976，many strangely things happened in Tangshan．They were signs for a earthquake．But people who were lived there didn't think much of that．In 3：42 am that day，the earth began to shake，that destroyed almost all the city in a few seconds．Many people，including workers and doctors，came to rescue those who trapped under the ruins．Later that afternoon，other big earthquake struck the city．More people were killed or injured and more buildings fall down．Very soon the army sent a lot of soldier to help，but teams were organized to dig out the trapped and buried the dead．By and by things improved and the city began to breathe again．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹了發(fā)生于1976年7月28日的唐山大地震；其中包括地震之前的征兆以及地震后的救援情況．

解答 Several days before July 28，1976，manystrangelythings
happened in Tangshan．They were signs for a earthquake．
But people who were lived there didn't think much of that．
In 3：42 am that day，the earth began to shake，that destroyed
almost all the city in a few seconds．Many people，including
workers and doctors，came to rescue those who∧trapped under
the ruins．Later that afternoon，other big earthquake struck the city．
More people were killed or injured and more buildings fall down．
Very soon the army sent a lot of soldier to help，but teams were
organized to dig out the trapped andburiedthe dead．By and by things
improved and the city began to breathe again．

詳解：
1．strangely改為strange  考查形容詞   此處用來(lái)修飾名詞things，在句中作的是定語(yǔ)，故用形容詞strange．
2．a(chǎn)改為an   考查不定冠詞    此處用來(lái)在單數(shù)名詞earthquake之前，表示泛指"一次地震"；由于earthquake首字母的發(fā)音為元音/?：/，故用an．
3．去掉lived之前的were   考查語(yǔ)態(tài)    本句為定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞who在從句中作主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞lived構(gòu)成的是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；故去掉lived之前的were  
4．In改為At   考查介詞   此處用在具體時(shí)刻的前面，故用介詞At．
5．that改為which   考查關(guān)系代詞   本句為非限定性的定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞指代前面的句子，在從句中作主語(yǔ)；故用which．
6．在trapped前加were   考查時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)    本句為定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞who指代前面的代詞those在從句作主語(yǔ)，與動(dòng)詞trap構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系；由于本文描述的是1976年唐山大地震時(shí)的情況，故此處應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；故在trapped前加were．
7．other改為another   考查不定代詞   根據(jù)上文可知，此處指的是：當(dāng)天下午晚些時(shí)候，在唐山又發(fā)生了一次大地震；other的后面通常跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，意為：其他的，別的；這里指的是：再一次，又一次；故用another．
8．fall改為fell   考查時(shí)態(tài)  由于本句是由and連接在一起的并列句，故and前后兩個(gè)句子的謂語(yǔ)部分在形式上應(yīng)保持一致；由于上文描述的是1976年唐山大地震時(shí)的情況，故此處應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)；故用fell．
9．soldier改為soldiers   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   由于此處的修飾詞為a lot of，指的是許多的士兵；這里應(yīng)使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故用soldiers．
10．buried改為bury   考查動(dòng)詞   此處用在連詞and之后，與動(dòng)詞不定式to dig out the trapped一起在句中作并列賓語(yǔ)，因此此處需要省略掉動(dòng)詞不定式符號(hào)to，故用bury．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類(lèi)誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類(lèi)試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類(lèi)的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類(lèi)試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類(lèi)句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．