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5．假設(shè)你班最近舉行了一次班會(huì)，討論怎樣使英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)變成一件快樂(lè)的事．請(qǐng)根據(jù) 提示信息，為某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銈兊挠懻撉闆r并提出你的建議．
1．分析英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀與原因．
2．提出你的建議，如：演講或英文話劇等（至少三點(diǎn)）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100 字左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．

Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all．We can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings．Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．
These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就怎樣使英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)變成一件快樂(lè)的事寫(xiě)一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：分析英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀與原因．提出你的建議，如：演講或英文話劇等（至少三點(diǎn)）．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為分析英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀與原因．第二部分為提出建議，如：演講或英文話劇等（至少三點(diǎn)）．．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
take part in  參加
out-of-class activities 課后活動(dòng)
English speech contest 英語(yǔ)演講比賽
高分句型一：Most students believe that there are many ways to do so..此句用了that 引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．此句用了what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．（高分句型一） First of all．We can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings．Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（分析英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀與原因．）
These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．（高分句型二）（ 提出建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開(kāi)端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過(guò)渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．