Question

4．假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友王林生病了．現(xiàn)在請你給他寫一封信，要點包括：
1．聽到好友生病時的心情；
2．勸他放棄熬夜等壞習(xí)慣；
3．建議他身體康復(fù)后要保證睡眠，經(jīng)常鍛煉，合理飲食．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
You often stay up （1）late at night，which （2）is really a bad habit（你經(jīng)常熬夜，這真是一個壞習(xí)慣）．
（1）stay up 熬夜
（2）which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，指代前面的主句，使得文章更簡潔．
句型二：
it is essential that（1）you should keep a balanced diet，which is helpful to （2）your health（保持平衡的飲食對你來講是必要的，這有助于你保持健康）．
It is  essential that…：…是必要的；從句中動詞用虛擬語氣，即"（should）+動詞原形"；
be helpful to 對…有益的

解答 Dear Wang Lin，
I am terribly sorry that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon（表達自己的關(guān)心）．You often stay up late at night，which is really a bad habit[高分句型句型一]．Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit（勸誡他去除壞習(xí)慣）．
To keep healthy，you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise．Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit．In addition，it is essential that you should keep a balanced diet，which is helpful to your health[高分句型句型二]．（提出保持健康的建議）．
Your，
Li Hua

點評 寫作時首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時態(tài)；審要點，不能有要點的遺漏．其次要考慮高級詞語和句型的選用；再次，運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．