Question

10．近來中學生的個人安全問題日益受到社會的廣泛關(guān)注，很多中學生缺乏自我保護的意識．請你用英語就此話題寫一篇短文，并對周圍的同學提出自我保護的建議．
要點：1、分析導致中學生安全問題的原因；
      2、中學生自我保護的重要性；
      3、你是如何進行自我保護的；
      4、你對同學們的建議．
注意：詞數(shù) 120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是根據(jù)所給要點內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于中學生如何進行自我保護的短文，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．重要短語：be due to（由于），a lack of（缺乏），be of great significance（重要），live up to parents'expectations …（達到父母的期望），contributes to（有利于，促成），turn to sb for help（向某人求助）．

解答 Recently，it has been a great public concern that the students lack self-protection awareness，which is due to a lack of social experience among students【高分句型】（分析原因）．
Therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all．The importances are as follows：for one thing，security comes first．Without security，we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents'expectations．for another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family．【高分句型】Meanwhile，it also helps to build a more harmonious society．（自我保護的重要性）
Now the social atmosphere is not very good on television or newspapers which often have reported that somebody was kidnapped and so on．So in daily life，I am really aware of protecting my own life safety．What I often do are the followings：First，go home on time after school，don't stay out．Second，when I go home alone at night，try to pick a bright place to go or to choose the place where there are persons．Third，if a man sneaks behind you，don't panic，just to go to public places．（如何進行自我保護）
   Personally，in order to protect us students，above all，we should strengthen our security awareness．Besides，when accidents occur，we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help．The government also plays a leading role in protecting students．In a word，only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony．（建議）

點評 寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來．語言力求準確、簡潔．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．