Question

20．假設你是新華中學的學生張華，班里從外地轉來一名同學李明，他一時無法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱．請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封信：
 1．幫他分析原因； 2、給他提出建議； 3、陳述你幫助他的具體打算．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
 2．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear LiMing，
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely．                            
I hope you will find these ideas useful and you will get on well with your classmates soon．
Best regards，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查應用文中的書信的寫作．要求用英文根據(jù)下列要點用英語給從外地轉來一名同學李明寫一封信．要點都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點包括：幫他分析原因，給他提出建議，陳述你幫助他的具體打算，審題時注意時態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出．難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述．象范文的That's because you are new here and people don't know about you．使用了表語從句，還有With time going on，people will know you better and like to make friends with you．用了with的復合結構．還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫First，Second，Thirdly，Besides等．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely．That's because you are new here and people don't know about you．（高分句型）But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below．
First，you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters，and at the same time，learn to listen to other people's views．（高分句型）Second，it's better to learn about your classmates'likes and dislikes．Then you can have much in common with them．Thirdly，why not get to know more different people and show them you are also friendly．
Besides，I'm always ready to help you to join in some activities and I would like to introduce you to others．With time going on，people will know you better and like to make friends with you．（高分句型）
I hope you will find these ideas useful and get on well with your classmates soon．                                                
                                    Best regards                                           
                                      Zhang Hua

點評 書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略．同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采．