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4．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請給你的外教Mr．Black寫一封郵件，邀請他參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語讀書會（reading circle）活動，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：
1．介紹讀書活動的相關(guān)信息（例如：時間、地點、活動目的、內(nèi)容等）；
2．說明你發(fā)出邀請的原因；
3．詢問對方的意向．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Black，
I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
Your，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請給你的外教Mr．Black寫一封郵件，邀請他參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語讀書會（reading circle）活動，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：介紹讀書活動的相關(guān)信息（例如：時間、地點、活動目的、內(nèi)容等）；說明你發(fā)出邀請的原因；詢問對方的意向．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Aim to目的是；communicate with溝通，交流；face to face面對面；spare some time抽出時間；
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）
Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
       I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
      The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
      Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．