Question

近來(lái),一些省市相繼傳來(lái)醞釀高考改革的消息，英語(yǔ)考試將作為改革的重點(diǎn),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漫畫(huà)．用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文.
內(nèi)容要求： 1、描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容； 2、分析漫畫(huà)所反映的現(xiàn)象： 3、提出你的看法。

注意：
1.短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；    2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
3.詞數(shù)120左右：                    4文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。
As is displayed in the picture．some provinces are carrying out reforms in ‘‘Gaokao’’ especially focusing on the English subiect.

Answer 1

One possible version:
As is displayed in the picture, some provinces are carrying out reforms in “Gaokao”, especially focusing on the English subject. The score of English will be dropped while those of other subjects like Chinese and maths will jump higher. This causes a heated discussion.
Some government officials think English learning takes up too much time, simply to shift a learner’s attention from other subjects. As for the advantages of the required subjects, many people put Chinese and maths in the first place, for English is most likely to be useless after “Gaokao”.
Such opinions invite much concern. Personally, we students pick up English not only for the entry to a college but for a future career, which we can not actually foresee today. Anyhow, a foreign language can possibly take us that far. In case of that, English teaching should attach greater importance to the language skills rather than grammar and vocabulary to save time for other subjects.  

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求是：描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；分析漫畫(huà)所反映的現(xiàn)象；提出你的看法。要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意人稱(chēng)的一致性。字?jǐn)?shù)要求100詞左右。還應(yīng)該注意使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如take up，be likely to，還運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)形式作主語(yǔ)或；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等。并注意了句子變化和句子之間的銜接如：As for，not only …but，Anyhow，while等。