Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友Lessie即將來中國做交換生，來信請你給他推薦幾個中文名字。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示歡迎并樂于推薦；

2. 介紹中文名字的特點；

3. 告知他查看郵箱附件中所建議的名字。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

郵箱附件E-mail attachment

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lessie,

Hearing that you will come to China as an exchange student, I want to express a warm welcome to you. I’m very glad that you wish to have a Chinese name. There is no doubt that it will help you better fit in with the Chinese culture.

A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often contain some special meanings, expectations or blessings. However, unlike an English name, the family name of Chinese is usually put first and then a given name follows. In addition, I have come up with several Chinese names, which are added to the E-mail attachment.

I hope you will like one of them and have a good time in China.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1. 表示歡迎并樂于推薦；2. 介紹中文名字的特點；3. 告知他查看郵箱附件中所建議的名字。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，表示歡迎并樂于推薦。第二段，介紹中文名字的特點；告知他查看郵箱附件中所建議的名字。第三段，表達(dá)希望。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: an exchange student，express a warm welcome to，fit in with ， Chinese culture，consist of，some special meanings, expectations or blessing，the family name， come up with，the E-mail attachment。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子:現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句Hearing that you will come to China as an exchange student, I want to express a warm welcome to you. that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句There is no doubt that it will help you better fit in with the Chinese culture. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often contain some special meanings, expectations or blessings。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接: However，In addition。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。