2009屆考前短文改錯精選精練（2）

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍)．      76．           

Instead, they rented houses outside the school．There are                77．           

advantages for all．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and          78．           

cooperation among classmates，but of course it is safer．A dorm         79．           

is more like a society，where enables students to learn to get along with    80．           

the each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting      81．           

houses to live alone，it’s better for study as you can feel freely in          82．           

your own room without interrupted by others．As a result，you           83．           

can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly．         84．           

But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school．  85．           

Anyhow as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．

【答案】76．正確        77.rented改為rent    78．a(chǎn)ll改為both    79. but改為and

    80．where改為which   81．去掉the         82．freely改為free

    83. without后加being  84．study改為studying      85.problem改為problems

（2）

I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two      76      

weeks ago．I have been thinking about a question you asked      77      

me．In my opinion，you should go back after you finish your     78       

studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly    79         

needed nowadays in our country．It will be quite easily for you    80         

to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company here in    81          

our city hope to hire people like you．For another reason，       82         

I think it will be very much more convenient for you to look       83         

after your parents as they are getting old．Therefore this is only   84           

my point of view．It is up for you to make a right choice．       85           

【答案】76．√  77．A改為the      78．go改為come    79．That改為what  80．easily改為easy  81．company改為companies  82．city后加which／that    83．去掉very

84. Therefore改為But     85．for改為to

（3）

My parents and I went to the park last Sunday．       76．       

There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket      77．       

window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets．    78．       

In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager          79．       

to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened         80．       

my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got           81．       

separated from my parents．I had hard time looking         82．       

for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt   83．       

alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money,  84．       

so I had to walk to home，covering as much as 5 kilometers． 85．       

【答案】

My parents and I went to the park last Sunday．      76．   √   

There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket      77． visitors

window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets．    78． bought

In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager          79．   so  

to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened        80． Frightening

my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got          81． Unfortunately

separated from my parents．I had∧ hard time looking      82．  a     

for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt  83．  but     

alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84． lonely   

so I had to walk to home，covering as much as 5 kilometers．85．    to    

（4）

Dear Lin Tao，

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in deal with      76．        

the new high school life．I'd like to give you any advice．        77．        

Firstly，you must work hard at all lesson and try your best        78．        

to get good grades．By this way，you are likely to attend an      79．        

ideal university for a better future. Secondly，you need get        80．        

along well with your classmates and teachers，that will           81．        

help you to build good interpersonal relationships．Thirdly，      82．        

you have to learn what to live on your own．The ability           83．        

to survive in society is also of the great importance for us．        84．        

I hope you will find these ideas usefully．All the best!            85．        

                                                Yours，

                                                Li Hua

【答案】76．deal改為dealing   77．a(chǎn)ny改為some    78．lesson改為lessons    79．By改為In  80．need后加to    81．That改為which   82．√    83．What改為how    84．去掉the   85．usefully改為useful