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3．今年年初，無(wú)錫被評(píng)為2013年度內(nèi)地最宜居城市．假設(shè)你班對(duì)此進(jìn)行了一次班級(jí)討論，請(qǐng)你在答題卡指定的位置上用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的發(fā)言稿，闡述你的觀點(diǎn)和感想．內(nèi)容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大橋，甚至還有地鐵；
2．新添了很多露天開(kāi)放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家車(chē)越來(lái)越多，停車(chē)（park cars）已成了大問(wèn)題；
4．城市變化有利有弊；
5．你的希望．
注意：
1．短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2．第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2～3句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots ofnew roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends andholidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult topark cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hopethe government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and morebeautiful in the future．．

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分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀銓?duì)無(wú)錫被評(píng)為2013年度內(nèi)地最宜居城市的觀點(diǎn)和感想．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大橋，甚至還有地鐵；
2．新添了很多露天開(kāi)放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家車(chē)越來(lái)越多，停車(chē)（park cars）已成了大問(wèn)題；
4．城市變化有利有弊；
5．你的希望．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
a number of 大量的
have fun 玩的開(kāi)心
both…and…兩者都
deal with 處理
比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)  越來(lái)越…
【高分句型】
1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．
to have a picnic and have fun 動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
2．①M(fèi)ore and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars．
①比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)  越來(lái)越…
②it是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（政府修建了很多新路，大橋，甚至還有地鐵）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天開(kāi)放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家車(chē)越來(lái)越多，停車(chē)已成了大問(wèn)題）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市變化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出．寫(xiě)作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．