Question

7．我們從各大媒體了解到由于空氣污染導致人類受害的各種現(xiàn)象．比如：中國的許多大城市出現(xiàn)"霧霾"；印度有上千人死于高溫；世界各地出現(xiàn)各種肺病等等．對此情況，請你根據(jù)以下要點，以Protect the air為題，寫一篇英語短文，呼吁大家減少空氣污染．
1． The air has become really polluted around us．
2． There is heavy smog（霧霾）…
3． Thousands of people in India…
4． We can begin with small things…
參考詞匯：
die（死）；high temperature（高溫）；lung diseases（肺�。�；plant（種植）；ride bikes（騎單車）；call to prevent（呼吁阻止）
要求：
①80詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；
②語法正確，文理通順、流暢，并適當發(fā)揮；
③書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔
④文中不得使用你的真實姓名及校名
Protect the air
Air is as important as food．____________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let's take actions now!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
So it's important for us to keep air clean and fresh 因此，保持空氣清新是很重要的．這是it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型，對于…來說…是有用的．     
高分句型二
And there are all kinds of lung diseases around the world世界各地都有各種各樣的肺�。�這是there be句型，表示某地有某物．

解答 Protect the air
Air is as important as food．So it's important for us to keep air clean and fresh【高分句型一，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．However，the air has become really polluted around us．The polluted air has caused many serious problems【要點一，空氣污染已經引起許多問題】．There is heavy smog in many cities of China【要點二，關于霧霾】．Thousands of people in India died from high temperature．And there are all kinds of lung diseases around the world【高分句型二，there be句型的使用】．【要點三，空氣污染的后果】
How to keep air clean and fresh？We can begin with small things，such as planting more trees，riding bikes instead of driving．We can also call people to prevent the air pollution．【要點四，應該采取的措施】
Let's take actions now!

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯
關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．