Question

5．最近，學(xué)校一項(xiàng)關(guān)于"快樂是什么"的調(diào)查顯示，大多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為"與同學(xué)相處融洽"是決定自己是否快樂的主要因素，50%的同學(xué)覺得"取得好成績(jī)"、"得到老師、父母的關(guān)愛"也是讓自己快樂的重要因素．假如你是Green，將于下周在全校升旗儀式上就"What is happiness？"為題發(fā)表演講，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示用英文寫一篇80詞左右的演講稿．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果；
2．闡述你的看法；
3．提出獲得幸福的方法．
要求：1．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
     2．文中須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順．
    3．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
What is happiness？
I'm standing here to tell you about the result of the survey．Most students think
happiness is to get a good score；to get the love of their parents or teachers；to get well along with others and so on．When I receive this answer，I will frown with unhappiness．Are these real happiness？
In a way，if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness，then try to be like this：
1．Be a kind，helpful and friendly person．
2．Be a person with a lot of smiles．
Well，the more work，the less words，let's begin to work hard now．Try to be a good person，then you will not feel sorry about yourself when you grow up．It's the best happiness for everyone，I think．Work hard is good．But don't forget your friends and your family after work．Spend more time with them and you'll have more happiness．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you want to be a person with a lot of happiness，then try to be like this如果你想成為一個(gè)開心的人，盡力像這樣做．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
Spend more time with them and you'll have more happiness．花更多的時(shí)間和他們?cè)谝黄穑�你�?huì)有更多的快樂．
祈使句+and+陳述句，前一分句表示一種條件或假設(shè)，相當(dāng)于if條件狀語(yǔ)從句，后一分句表示一種結(jié)果或推論．

解答 What is happiness？
I'm standing here to tell you about the result of the survey．Most students think happiness is to get a good score；to get the love of their parents or teachers；to get well along with others and so on．（介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果）When I receive this answer，I will frown with unhappiness．Are these real happiness？（闡述你的看法）
In a way，if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness，then try to be like this【高分句型一】：
1．Be a kind，helpful and friendly person．
2．Be a person with a lot of smiles．
Well，the more work，the less words，let's begin to work hard now．Try to be a good person，then you will not feel sorry about yourself when you grow up．It's the best happiness for everyone，I think．Work hard is good．But don't forget your friends and your family after work．Spend more time with them and you'll have more happiness．（提出獲得幸福的方法）【高分句型二】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇話題作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是首先用正確的英語(yǔ)把調(diào)查結(jié)果表達(dá)出來，還有給出自己的看法并提出獲取幸福的方法．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．