Question

18．我和我弟弟在同一個(gè)房間里．我們的房間很整潔．電腦在書(shū)桌上．書(shū)籍在書(shū)櫥里．鋼筆和橡皮在鉛筆盒里．我的鑰匙在書(shū)包里．我有一個(gè)足球．它在床下面．我的弟弟沒(méi)有足球，但他有一個(gè)籃球．它在椅子下面．我們喜歡我們的房間．
    結(jié)合上面短文，寫(xiě)一篇英文短文介紹你的房間，字?jǐn)?shù)在60-80．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
My Room
My brother and I are in the same room．My brother and I are in the same room．There are many things in it．The room is clean and tidy．The computer is on the desk．The books are in the bookcase．A pen and an eraser arein the pencil box．My keys are in my bag．I have a football．It is under the bed．My younger brother doesn't have football，but he has a basketball andit is under the chair．We love our room．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many things in it．  里面有很多東西．這是There be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
The computer is on the desk．電腦在桌子上．  on the desk  是介詞詞組，放在be動(dòng)詞的后面作表語(yǔ)．

解答 My Room
My brother and I are in the same room【開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明主題】．There are many things in it．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】The room is clean and tidy．The computer is on the desk【高分句型二，注意介詞詞組的使用】．The books are in the bookcase．A pen and an eraser are in the pencil box．My keys are in my bag．I have a football．It is under the bed．My younger brother doesn't have football，but he has a basketball and it is under the chair．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹房間】We love our room．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．