Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny向你詢問有關(guān)如何保持健康的問題。請(qǐng)你給她發(fā)一個(gè)電子郵件，提一些建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
注意合理飲食，要多吃魚、肉、豆類等，特別是新鮮蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。
注意鍛煉身體，勞逸結(jié)合，多參加體育鍛煉。
3、保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個(gè)小時(shí)。
3、保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個(gè)小時(shí)。
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右。2、注意行文連貫。3、開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好。
Dear Jenny,
How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jenny,
How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice.
First of all,  try to develop a balanced diet. You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients. Don’t eat too much food with sugar because it is bad for your health and can make you put on weight. 
Secondly, you ought to take enough exercise and learn to combine work with relaxation. Take part in sports as often as possible and you will find you’re much healthier.
My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day. Remember not to stay up too late.
Yours,
Li Hua   

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中有一些常用的詞組和詞組： take in 吸收，理解，put on weight.增加體重，Take part in參加， as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常， stay up too late 熬夜，You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients.這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day.這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句， 還有文章使用了First of all, Secondly這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。