Question

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將選舉新一屆副主席,你欲參選，必須寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
請(qǐng)按以下提示,寫(xiě)一篇競(jìng)選演講稿。

競(jìng)選職位：學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部副主席 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì): （1）性格外向、與人相處融洽 （2）善于組織各種活動(dòng) 中選后決心：協(xié)助主席，服務(wù)同學(xué) 中選后設(shè)想：舉辦講座、英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)、英語(yǔ)演講比賽等活動(dòng)來(lái)提高同學(xué)英語(yǔ)水平，激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)興趣 表達(dá)愿望：希望同學(xué)們投票選你，相信你能干好工作

參考詞匯:副主席vice president　競(jìng)選run for
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
2．短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin.  
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Thank you.

Answer 1

Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. If I am lucky enough to be the vice president, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students. In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president.
Thank you.

試題分析：試題貼近考生實(shí)際生活，給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，主要圍繞英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部選舉新一屆副主席的情況，寫(xiě)演講稿，要點(diǎn)很細(xì)，屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，需要注意遣詞造句，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，選用詞組和各種句型和語(yǔ)法，(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】(1)使用一些如run for參加競(jìng)選，be qualified for合格的，勝任的，vote for投票贊成，這樣的詞組。句式上也富有變化：Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞， In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)。