Question

4．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
    增加：在缺詞處一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改1 0處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother．He has been died for a year．When I was a teenager，he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn．We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning，stayed in local restaurant for breakfast，and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations．Just after dawn，he would find the right spot in the woods．He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement．Though I never hunted an animal successfully，but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience．

Answer 1

分析 在這個(gè)短文中作者講述了少年時(shí)期Marion舅舅教他捕獵的經(jīng)歷，盡管作者沒(méi)能成功地捕獲到一個(gè)獵物，但他卻從這個(gè)寶貴的經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了耐心和勇敢．

解答 Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother．He has been died for a year．When I was a teenager，he taught us how to hunt in the New
                                                                     brothers                    dead                                                                   me                            
Jersey woods used the hours before dawn．We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning，stayed in∧local restaurant for breakfast，and then
                   using                                                                                                                                 a
travel on to one of his hunting destinations．Just after dawn，he would find the right spot in the woods．He would show me how not to make a sound
traveled                                                            before      
and a movement．Though I never hunted an animal successfully，but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience．
or                                                                                        去掉but                                    patient

1．brother改為brothers；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，one of是指其中一個(gè)后跟名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．died改為dead；考查形容詞，系動(dòng)詞be后跟形容詞表示一種狀態(tài)．
3．us改為me；考查代詞，這里賓格代詞應(yīng)與前面狀語(yǔ)從句中的主語(yǔ)I保持一致，所以用me．
4．used改為using；考查動(dòng)詞的分詞形式，現(xiàn)在分詞表主動(dòng)，過(guò)去分詞表被動(dòng)，這里動(dòng)詞use是由主語(yǔ)主動(dòng)發(fā)出，故用using．
5．in后面加a；考查冠詞，句中resturant是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，所以前面加a．
6．travel改為traveled；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，在這個(gè)句子中travel和前面的left，stayed并列作謂語(yǔ)，所以時(shí)態(tài)保持一致，根據(jù)語(yǔ)境應(yīng)當(dāng)用過(guò)去時(shí)．
7．a(chǎn)fter改為before；考查介詞，根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境，應(yīng)當(dāng)是在黎明之前就做好捕獵的準(zhǔn)備，故用before．
8．a(chǎn)nd改為or；考查連詞，and與or都可以表并列，但and用于肯定句，or用于否定句和疑問(wèn)句，所以這里用or．
9．去掉but；考查連詞，but不能與though連用，前面從句中有though，所以這里要去掉but．
10．patiently改為patient；考查形容詞，這里形容詞patient和brave并列作系動(dòng)詞be的表語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先要快速閱讀短文，掌握短文的基本大意，然后分析句群結(jié)構(gòu)，弄清句子之間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，再運(yùn)用所掌握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)等基
本知識(shí)詳細(xì)閱讀，找出短文中的錯(cuò)誤加以改正．