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7．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不久前在學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)．校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文：
1．參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；
2．堅(jiān)持寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)日記的作用；
3．英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReading）對(duì)你的幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．Besides，sometimes，someforeigners are glad to join us．By talkingwith them，my oral English improved a lot．I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to myEnglish．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．．

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分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫(xiě)一篇稿件，介紹課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)．要點(diǎn)包括：參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；堅(jiān)持寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)日記的作用；英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReading）對(duì)你的幫助．寫(xiě)作時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：learn words byheart （用心背單詞），feel nervous （覺(jué)得緊張），give sb good advice on （給某人關(guān)于…的建議），chances to do sth （做某事的機(jī)會(huì)），make much progress （取得很大進(jìn)展），memorize new words （記憶新單詞）．

解答 As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．【高分句型】（開(kāi)頭---引出話題）
 In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．【高分句型】Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oralEnglish improved a lot．（參加英語(yǔ)角的益處）  I also find it useful to keep Englishdiaries．I keep on doing it these years and it ishelpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．【高分句型】（堅(jiān)持寫(xiě)日記的作用） Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．【高分句型】（英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReading）的幫助）
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．（結(jié)尾---總結(jié)概括）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．