假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一 個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

    The girl I will always remember her is Mary,who was my classmate seven year ago. She was ： quiet,always greeted the teachers at our school and never spoke ill anyone. At that time,all the kids in my class included me were impolite,never listening to the teachers. Therefore,Mary was always so polite. One day I asked her what she wasn’ t like the rest of us so what she told me changed the way I acted. She said,uIf you ever want to be respectful in life,you have to respect others." Heard what she said,I started respecting others more and telling another people what I had been told.

1. . .. always remember her...   去掉her

2. . .. seven year ago.   year→years

3. . .. spoke ill anyone.   ill后加 of

4. . .. my class included me ...   included→including

5. Therefore,Mary was ...   Therefore→However

6. . .. what she wasn’t like ...   what→why

7. . .. so what she told ...   so→and

8. . .. to be respectftil...   respectful→respected

9. Heard what she said ...   Heard→Hearing   

10. . .. telling another people ...   another→other

題目來源：2016年英語周報高三新課標(biāo) > 第43期 2015-2016高三課標(biāo)

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