Question

17．春節(jié)前，你和你的同學(xué)做了一次志愿者．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一篇日記，描述此次經(jīng)歷．

時間	2016年2月1日，星期二
地點	溫暖敬老院
人物	你、李平、魏華
過程	送書籍和水果、聊天、洗衣服、打掃衛(wèi)生、教電腦
你的感受	？

注意：1.100字左右（開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)）
    2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
February 1，2016                          Tuesday       Sunny
Today Li Ping，Wei Hua and I went to Warm Nursing Home to visit the elderly people．
                                                          
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為志愿者日記．
寫作要點為：1，時間；2，地點；3，人物；4，過程；5，個人感受．

解答 February 1，2016                          Tuesday       Sunny
       Today Li Ping，Wei Hua and I went to Warm Nursing Home to visit the elderly people．
       In the morning we bought some books and fresh fruits．On arriving there，we started working，doing some cleaning and washing．Later we also taught them how to use computers．As some elderly people felt lonely，we chatted with them about their old days and told them stories．The elderly were very happy!At 5：00 pm，we had to say goodbye to them．The elderly people thanked us very much for our kindness．
       As volunteers we feel very happy though tired，because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives．

點評 考生需根據(jù)所給的表格信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．