Question

11．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)英文報(bào)Talks with Jamie專(zhuān)欄的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信．信中該名高中生訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，作業(yè)多，不得不熬夜．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英文給該學(xué)生回信并提供建議．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．表示理解并給予安慰；
2．指出經(jīng)常熬夜的危害；
3．給出你的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開(kāi)頭與格式已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Hi，Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．                                   
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一封回信．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．指出經(jīng)常熬夜的危害；3．給出你的建議．寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：at the moment（目前，現(xiàn)在）；in fact（事實(shí)上）；as we all know（眾所周知）；do harm to （對(duì)…有害）；the next day（第二天）；ensure（保證，確保）；take a nap （睡午覺(jué)）
高分句型：1．In fact，the problem ①you are facing is common among senior high school students，②so you don't have to worry much．
                 ①you are facing 是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾主語(yǔ)the problem；②so引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
                 2．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day．
                 if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
                 3．First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency．
                句中it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是不定式短語(yǔ)to improve your study efficiency．

解答 Hi，Worried，
I'm so sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．In fact，the problem you are facing is common among senior high school students，so you don't have to worry much（高分句型一）．
As we all know，lack of sleep does harm to our health．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day（高分句型二）．Therefore，we must ensure a good night's sleep．But how can you make it？Here are a few suggestions．
First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency（高分句型三）．In this way，you can save a lot of time．Besides，why not take a nap after lunch？It helps you feel refreshed and energetic the whole afternoon．
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful．
                                                                Jamie

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理安排寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．